- Interesting transition in intro
- Camera too shaky at times
- Portals very well done
- Music contributed to intense atmosphere, matched pacing and narrative
Marisa
- Some editing was not very smooth, pacing was off
- Should have built up to the chase
- POV shots were innovative but sometimes excessive (duration too long)
- Locations were limited and school uniform undermined the narrative (costumes and mise-en-scène can play a very big part)
- Music transition not smooth from one song to the next
- Nice framing, but have to keep subject in frame
- Great twist at the end; powerful plot and narrative
- Deliberate use of colour scheme and mask
- Some cuts were quite choppy
- Stylistically incoherent: some locations did not match with theme/world of toys
Erik, Travis, Jacob, Henry
- Very twilight Zone styled: great homage to the Rod Serling intro
- Sometimes the sound was inaudible, covered by the wild sound but overall great sound design that contributed to the sombre and mysterious atmosphere
- Interesting idea but perhaps could have been reinforced by chase scene
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