- The story arc is coherent and flowing but ended a bit abruptly( with the black scene and dialogue).
- Script was well written, excellent voice-overs which supported the storyline.
- Comprehensive sound design (ambience sound in the restaurant scene)
- Sound levels are much more consistent (e.g heartbeat sound effect is no longer overwhelming)
- Still lacking in transitions; establishing shots could be employed to smoothen the continuity
As an IB learner, I took on the role of a communicator and consulted my peers for feedback on our film noir, particularly on the sound aspect since I am the sound designer. See below.
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